After trying to craft the perfect home page for international students and helping education institutions to use their websites to recruit students for the last 5 years, I'm pretty certain that there's no such thing as the perfect pitch. It's horses for courses as they say.
But if you absolutely had to create a fantastic offer with limited copy and real estate because, oh let's say $10000 depended on it how would you respond? In this competition Seth Godin amongst others lays down the challenge.
It's a good opportunity to think about how you'd respond in your real world job n'est ce pas?